This blog has been archived, no further content will be uploaded or added. You are welcome to continue viewing posts, however commenting has been disabled.
Wednesday 7 August 2019
About me 2019
We were learning about knowing what to share online.
I am Larz from Awapuni school,Gisborne. I like the variety of colours in your background. I also like to draw characters. Something I think you could work on is making your name a different colour because its green and it's on the green part of the background. Great job Koston.
今日は, Koston. My name is Emerald, and I am a Year 6 student that goes to Awapuni School in Gisborne. For starters, I very much like your grammar, and that you understood the criteria. I think you could work on your aesthetic a bit.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.
This comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteI am Larz from Awapuni school,Gisborne.
ReplyDeleteI like the variety of colours in your background. I also like to draw characters. Something I think you could work on is making your name a different colour because its green and it's on the green part of the background.
Great job Koston.
今日は, Koston.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Emerald, and I am a Year 6 student that goes to Awapuni School in Gisborne.
For starters, I very much like your grammar, and that you understood the criteria.
I think you could work on your aesthetic a bit.
Thank you for your information i really enjoyed your comment.
Delete